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Patter to Petrichor

by Sasindie Subasinghe  (Sri Lanka)

July 2021

Write the World Review

Audio: "Patter to Petrichor," read by Sasindie Subasinghe

It begins with patter, like the impatient tap
of painted nails, the rain thrums on the roof.
The wind swooshes in, positions the curtains
parallel to the floor, and does a better job than
the house cat at knotting eights between
your ankles. The water falls faster. Faster than
the flurry of feet, rushing to fasten slamming
doors and shivering windows. It’s cold.
But the rain beckons for you in pattering
undulations, promising fluttering rains
and the sweetest taste of the cosmos
on your lips. So you succumb. Fingers wrapping
around metal window grills, you stretch out your hand
and call for the rain. So it kisses you, like sparks
across your skin. And then, as abruptly as it began,
it ends. And it ends with petrichor.


Sasindie Subasinghe is a 17-year-old writer from Colombo, Sri Lanka. She likes long car rides, sipping tea on rainy evenings, and gazing into the night sky. You can find her writing infused with lightning, stars, the sciences, and a quiet resolve to understand the ways of life.

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12/3/22, 12:37 AM

Gretel Alberta

11/19/22, 9:15 AM

This is a masterpiece.... Well done

Kerenhappuch

10/12/22, 2:00 AM

An amazing piece on climate change. Congratulations!

Kerenhappuch

10/12/22, 1:58 AM

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I love this! Could read this over and over again.

Kerenhappuch

10/12/22, 1:56 AM

Such a beautiful piece Lyat. Congratulations!

Keren-happuch

10/12/22, 1:54 AM

From your piece, you're an inspiration and a driven person who wants to make the world better. I hope you get to achieve all these and I hope you receive all the support.

Keren-happuch

10/12/22, 1:48 AM

Brilliant and educative in all aspects!

Keren

10/12/22, 1:43 AM

Everything about this piece has perfectly collided with the perfect words. Teen years are special and form a concrete part of a person's life. Glad I read this now. It's a beautiful piece.

Keren-happuch

9/29/22, 4:40 PM

Lovely piece!

Tom Lofft

9/24/22, 2:13 PM

Was this inspired by flights over Iceland?

Sydney

9/24/22, 10:04 AM

Amazing. I love it.

Allison

9/23/22, 7:34 AM

This is just so good!!!! "The air has been poisoned' I love how you describe things! Congrats :))